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Was it kinda of cheesy in some parts? |
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Duh, there was one part where Kaiba was at the coffeeshop and Shizuka told him that that she couldn't come (I forgot why), but he kept looking at his watch, expecting that she would come, anyway. She didn't come, so he left 2 hours earlier than he usually does. He felt sad the rest of the week. C'mon, that doesn't sound like Kaiba. I can't imagine him drinking coffee at a public coffeeshop, anyway. Of course, there were a lot more cheesy parts, but this is one I really dislike for some reason. |
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I found this on google last night. It was possibly the most interesting thing I've had the pleasure of readingfor a while, and was most needed when all my friends were drunk.
A huge amount of kudos for this, it's astounding. And really helped me with my project. |
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Project?
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Kaiba is Japanese, he probably drinks tea.
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Yeah, well, she used the English names, so it probably takes place in America.
Using the English names is already a big mistake, anyway. |
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Even if you use English names, the story should still take place in Japan, or at least the Japanese characters (like Kaiba, totally not American) should retain their Japanese culture.
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Exactly. Like being that most of the characters are Japanese it would be very unlikely for them to be christian.
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Or drink coffee.
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More like shinto buddist drinking tea.
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Yeah, I read some fic where he was sampling coffee and was all 'Jesus Christ' and shit like that... Ugh, bad writer is bad. I can't see Kaiba drinking coffee, even beyond the fact that he's Japanese, people can get hung up on that shit quite easily, and Kaiba wouldn't allow himself to become dependent on something like that. Also, Kaiba doesn't really seem too 'religious' to me, I wouldn't say atheist, but maybe deist or agnostic.
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Kaiba is totally agnostic.
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Haha. I don't know, I just can't see Kaiba being too religious, what with him denouncing all of the stuff Ishizu tells him.
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He disregards religion a lot in the anime/manga, but knows there is some sort of higher power at work by the end. He's totally agnostic.
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Agnostic/Deist, same thing basically (not really, but still~), haha.
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Do it for Noah next.
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Meh, I think it should be done for Ryou next, his character is raped (metaphorically and literally >_>) so much in fanfiction it makes me want to claw my eyes out.
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Agreed.
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Basketcat is going to.
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Basket with her long list of fics that she never writes from laziness? That eventually right now seems more like never or far off in the future.
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Noooo, I'll do this first to further put off my fics! |
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Basket gets lazy?
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Everyone. ~
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Since I've said nothing on the actual Kaiba analysis, it was really well done and I agree with a lot that was said. |
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All smart people do.
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