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I'm pretty much the same way, it seems completely ridiculous that anyone can extensively like Silentshipping, but I actually read it, and it was pretty good. It wasn't "OMG THIS IS AMAZING AND IC AND EVERYTHING," but it was a decent read.
Well, that's good that you enjoyed it. I'm not saying the story automatically sucks because its all about SxS (in case that's what some people are thinking). That wouldn't be fair to the author imo. But, yeah its probably good...its just one of those types of fanfiction pairings that I tend to stay away from.

Was it kinda of cheesy in some parts?
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Well, that's good that you enjoyed it. I'm not saying the story automatically sucks because its all about SxS (in case that's what some people are thinking). That wouldn't be fair to the author imo. But, yeah its probably good...its just one of those types of fanfiction pairings that I tend to stay away from.

Was it kinda of cheesy in some parts?
I also read it. I don't like Silentshipping, either. It wasn't that great, but at least I didn't have the urge to pull my hair out, like I usually have :l

Duh, there was one part where Kaiba was at the coffeeshop and Shizuka told him that that she couldn't come (I forgot why), but he kept looking at his watch, expecting that she would come, anyway. She didn't come, so he left 2 hours earlier than he usually does. He felt sad the rest of the week.
C'mon, that doesn't sound like Kaiba. I can't imagine him drinking coffee at a public coffeeshop, anyway.
Of course, there were a lot more cheesy parts, but this is one I really dislike for some reason.
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I found this on google last night. It was possibly the most interesting thing I've had the pleasure of readingfor a while, and was most needed when all my friends were drunk.
A huge amount of kudos for this, it's astounding. And really helped me with my project.
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I found this on google last night. It was possibly the most interesting thing I've had the pleasure of readingfor a while, and was most needed when all my friends were drunk.
A huge amount of kudos for this, it's astounding. And really helped me with my project.
Project?
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Kaiba is Japanese, he probably drinks tea.
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Kaiba is Japanese, he probably drinks tea.
Yeah, well, she used the English names, so it probably takes place in America.
Using the English names is already a big mistake, anyway.
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Even if you use English names, the story should still take place in Japan, or at least the Japanese characters (like Kaiba, totally not American) should retain their Japanese culture.

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Even if you use English names, the story should still take place in Japan, or at least the Japanese characters (like Kaiba, totally not American) should retain their Japanese cutlure.
Exactly. Like being that most of the characters are Japanese it would be very unlikely for them to be christian.
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Or drink coffee.
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Or drink coffee.
Or be a Christian while drinking coffee!
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More like shinto buddist drinking tea.
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More like shinto buddist drinking tea.
Yeah, I read some fic where he was sampling coffee and was all 'Jesus Christ' and shit like that... Ugh, bad writer is bad. I can't see Kaiba drinking coffee, even beyond the fact that he's Japanese, people can get hung up on that shit quite easily, and Kaiba wouldn't allow himself to become dependent on something like that. Also, Kaiba doesn't really seem too 'religious' to me, I wouldn't say atheist, but maybe deist or agnostic.

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Was it kinda of cheesy in some parts?
Yeah, I mean, I'm not saying that Kaiba wasn't OOC at some points, but I can't really blame the author, it's hard to put Kaiba in a relationship if he's completely IC-- not a good excuse, but.. It was cheesy in a few bits, and some parts didn't quite make sense to me (that Kaiba would be so willing to have sex with Shizuka, considering how he's probably scarred from Gozaburo's 'training'), but at least it wasn't "Serenity, I love you so much! Marry me!" "Oh, Seto, I do~"... /dies

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Kaiba is totally agnostic.
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Kaiba is totally agnostic.
Totally!
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Totally!

Totally~
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Totally~
Haha. I don't know, I just can't see Kaiba being too religious, what with him denouncing all of the stuff Ishizu tells him.
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He disregards religion a lot in the anime/manga, but knows there is some sort of higher power at work by the end. He's totally agnostic.
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He disregards religion a lot in the anime/manga, but knows there is some sort of higher power at work by the end. He's totally agnostic.
Agnostic/Deist, same thing basically (not really, but still~), haha.
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Do it for Noah next.
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Do it for Noah next.
Meh, I think it should be done for Ryou next, his character is raped (metaphorically and literally >_>) so much in fanfiction it makes me want to claw my eyes out.
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Meh, I think it should be done for Ryou next, his character is raped (metaphorically and literally >_>) so much in fanfiction it makes me want to claw my eyes out.
Agreed.
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Basketcat is going to.
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Basketcat is going to.

...eventually!
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Basket with her long list of fics that she never writes from laziness? That eventually right now seems more like never or far off in the future.
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Basket with her long list of fics that she never writes from laziness? That eventually right now seems more like never or far off in the future.
Pffffffft.
Noooo, I'll do this first to further put off my fics!
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Basket gets lazy?
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Pffffffft.
Noooo, I'll do this first to further put off my fics!
I'll believe it when I see it.


Since I've said nothing on the actual Kaiba analysis, it was really well done and I agree with a lot that was said.
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...eventually!
If you don't do it, I will~.

(Eventually)
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I'll believe it when I see it.


Since I've said nothing on the actual Kaiba analysis, it was really well done and I agree with a lot that was said.
All smart people do.
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